命题作文就是我们依据所给题目,确定中心,选择材料,写出符合题意,内容表达具体、充分的文章。
写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：
一、审准题目:文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定,一定要弄清主题的内涵,确立与文章联系的主题思想,表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是"跑题"作文,得分将会大打折扣,因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。
二、构思结构:就是开放思路,启动联想,构想表现形式,勾勒出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,发展段和结尾句,努力使之新颖,别致。
三、选择材料:这一点很重要,一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型精要。
四、表达:就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料,表达自己的思想,力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯,最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看,命题作文分为三种形式:1、记叙文类;2、说明文类; 3、议论文类。
下面就谈一谈记叙文的写作
记叙文就是以记叙人物的经历或事物发展变化过程为主的一种文章。在初中写作训练中,记叙文是最基本,最常见,最重要的书面表达形式。记叙文有"六要素"即指"时间,地点,人物和事件的起因,经过和结果"。一篇记叙文只要把这些要素写清楚,文章就会内容具体, 眉目清晰,中心意思明确。一般情况下,这六要素中的人物,时间,地点作为开端,要写在文章的开头。事件,原因常作为记叙文的段落发展,又称为文章的主体部分,应该放在文章的中间。结果作为记叙文的结局常放在文章的末尾处。
记叙文从写作的线索上来看,有三种表现形式：
1、以人物为主,围绕人物组织材料。
2、以事物为中心,围绕事件组织材料或围绕事件写人。
3、以写景状物,描写为主。
写好记叙文应注意以下几点:
1、明确写作目的:写文章的目的就是确切表达一个中心思想,文章的一切内容应自始自终地为展开中心服务。
2、选择细节材料:选择好的细节材料就是为了更好地表现主题,所选择的材料要有代表性,典型性。写作内容要详略得当,主要情节应详细写,次要内容要简略或概述。
1)关于写人物,一般要把某人的年龄,外貌和性格特征,人物行为,心理活动等方面简要概括出来。同时要略加点评或感想。
2)关于写事件,事件是记叙的核心,往往有它的起因,经过和结局。写事件要比较详细地交代事情的'来龙去脉,同时要重点突出,表达精练,防止渲染。
3、恰当的选择写作方法:记叙文的写作方法就是指写作的顺序,文章先写什么,后写什么都要有一定顺序。
中考经典展示：
(1) 以My Mother为题写一篇短文。(2003扬州)
内容要点:1.我的妈妈是护士,工作努力。2.上个月去北京,抗击SARS (fight against)。3.一个月没有回来。4.保护我们免受侵害。5.我爱妈妈,为妈妈自豪。
标题已给出，要求1.写清时间 2.要点要完整 3.可适当增加内容 4.字数在60个词左右
(2)班会上,老师要求每位同学用英语介绍自己的一位朋友,请你根据所提供的要点为题写一篇短文。(2003南京)
要点:1. Who is he / she。2. When and where did you get to know him / her。3. Why do you like him / her。
注意:1.文章的开头和结尾已给出(不计入词数) 2.词数60-80,须包括以上要点,可适当增加细节使短文意思通畅。3.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。4.文中不得出现真实的人名。校名等相关信息。
写作实践范例
以"My Chinese Teacher"为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:
1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。
2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。
3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。
My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.
My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.
Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.
Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we're getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.
Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.
新题导练
请以"My Classmate"为标题写一篇记叙文
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
英语作文命题（2）
三、 命题作文训练
A. 写人
1、以" My Mother "为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点：
① 妈妈是护士，在县人民医院工作。 她工作努力，工作中严格要求自己，因此，她的同事们对他评价很高;
② 2003年参加抗击"非典"的战斗。为了保护我们免受"非典"的侵害，一个多月没回家。当时，我非常想念妈妈; ③ 我爱妈妈，并为妈妈而自豪。
参考词汇：县 county; 抗击fight against; 战斗battle; 非典 SARS;
My mother
My mother is a nurse. She works in the People's Hospital of our county. She works very hard. She is very strict with herself in the work. So her workmates speak highly of her.
In 2003 she took part in the battle to fight against "SARS". She was away from home for more than one month. So I missed her very much, but I knew she was trying her best to protect us from "SARS" and she was doing an important thing.
I love my mother very much, and I am very proud of having such a great mother. I should learn the spirit of working hard and being strict in the work from her. When I grow up, I would like to be a person like my mother.
2、根据材料写一篇关于运动员张怡宁的报道：
Name Zhang Yining sex girl City Beijing
Birth 1982.10.5 height 1.68m weight 52 kilos
Achieve -ments 六岁开始学习乒乓球， 在1999年45届世乒赛上(the 45th Table Tennis World Championships)显示非凡的实力，获得亚军。 在2004年的雅典奥运会(Athens Olympic Games)上夺得金牌。 在刚刚结束的国际世乒赛(ITTF)上夺得女子单打冠军，成为乒乓球领域中的顶尖。
I'd like to introduce a girl to you. Her name is Zhang Yining. She was born in Beijing in 1982. She is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos. At the age of six, she began to play table tennis. In 1999, she won the second at the 45th Table Tennis World Championships. In the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, she won the first. And now she won the women's singles at the ITTF World Cup. She becomes the top of the table tennis field. We hope she will make greater progress in the future.
3、在初中三年的学习生活中，你一定交了不少好朋友，留下了许多美好的回忆。请以"My Best Friend Tom/Mary" 为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍一位你最要好的朋友，男生姓名用Tom;女生姓名用Mary统一代替。
内容要求：1、他/她的外貌特征和个性特点; 2、你们一起经历的一件你印象特别深刻的事情。
注 意：严禁使用真实的校名和姓名
My Best Friend Tom
Tom is my best friend. He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses. He is shorter but a little bit stronger than I am. In my eyes, he is a clever and brave boy.
One day we went to school by bus together as usual. The bus was so crowded at the rush time. "Oh, my god! Where's my wallet?" A woman beside us cried suddenly. We thought there must be a thief around us, and we tried to help her but failed in the end. The next stop was coming and the woman became more worried. Just then Tom rushed to the driver quickly and told him what happened.
All the passengers were taken to the police station and the thief was caught. We were late for class that morning; however, we felt excited at that unusual experience.
B. 状物
1、以My hometown为题，介绍家乡的地理、气候、风景、人文和风俗习惯等。字数约80个。
My hometown is in Kunming. Kunming is the capital of Yunnan province. Kunming is also a very beautiful city. It is called the "City of Eternal Spring", because it has spring-like climate all the year round. The Crossbridge Rice Noodles are famous traditional food of Yunnan. There is a famous exposition centre in Kunming. It is in the northern suburbs of Kunming. The Exposition's theme is "Man and Nature -Marching into the 21st Century". And in Yunnan there are twenty-six nationalities. It is a big family. Welcome to my hometown.
2、以My family为题，介绍家庭基本情况，字数约80个。
3、我市刚建成一座图书馆，请根据信息，用英文简短介绍：
1、时间：竣工：2006年6 月; 开放：2006年7月
2、地址：在中山路，与科学博物馆相邻, 对面是公园。
3、馆内设施：
三层 会议室(22个座位) 电脑室(50台)
二层 卫生间 Room for storing Books (10万册)
一层 咨询台 阅览室 阅览室 Children's Home
A big library has been built for people in our city. It was finished in June, 2006. It will be open in July. The library is on Zhongshan Road, next to the Science Museum. On the other side of the road, there's a park. There are three floors in the library. On the first floor, there are two reading rooms, and there're many kinds of books in it. On the second floor, there is a washing room and a room for storing books. It has about 10,000 books. On the third floor, there's a big meeting room and a computer room. The computer room has fifty computers. Books are my best friends. We should love books. Because they give us knowledge and make us happy.
4、中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我市--泉州参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。
要求： 1. 100 词左右; 2. 要点包括： a. 有悠久的历史，位于福建省的东部，离福州 198 公里，人口约 524 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹，如清源山;东湖等等;东湖是一个很美丽的地方，湖水清澈，无污染;湖中有各种各样的.鱼;你可以到那里划船，野餐，钓鱼，是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观市博物馆，在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石( fossil )。c. 祝大家在泉州玩得愉快。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Quan Zhou, now let me introduce our city -Quan Zhou to you. Quan Zhou is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometers away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 5,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Quan Zhou, such as Qingyuan Mountain, East Lake and so on. East Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Quan Zhou n Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Quan Zhou.
Thank you.
C. 记事
1、根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。字数60～70左右。
1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。 2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人。
3、他向我询问去温泉饭店(the Hot Spring Hotel)的路。
4、我告诉他沿着路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。
5、他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而感到高兴。
提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that
Yesterday evening, I went out for a walk with my mother. On the road, we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel. He thanked me very much for my help. I was happy that I could help him.
D. 议论
1、同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。要求：
⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。
⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确;⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。
参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
THE POLLUTIONS
① One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.
② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
The environment is becoming worse and worse. There a
英语作文命题（3）
高考英语命题话题类作文范文篇1
Which is more important, health or wealth? It is a hot topic among people. I can hardly answer this question. I didnt realize that health is more imporant until I saw a businessmans real life.
A successful businessman, one of my fathers friends, devoted himseff to his business. He works from morning to night every day. There is no weekends in his mind. He often says, "I must earn much money so that I can get what I want. "Lately, he is ill. Though he has a lot of money, he can do nothing but lie in the hospitals bed.
So I think health is more important than wealth. People can do nothing if they are always in poor health, let alone happiness. No matter we are rich or not, we can not ignore the importance of health.
健康和财富哪个更重要?这是人们常爱谈论的一个话题。我以前回答不出这个问题，但是现在从一个商人的真实生活中我意识到健康更重要。
我父亲的一位朋友，一个成功的商人，全身心投入到他的工作中。每天从早工作到晚，在他心目中根本没有周末的概念。他经常说：“我必须多挣钱，这样就可以想干什么就干什么。”近来，他病倒了，除了躺在医院病床上，什么也不能做。
所以，我认为健康比财富更重要。如果一个人身体总是不好，他什么也做不成，更不用谈幸福了。不管我们贫穷还是富有，都不能忽视健康的重要性。
高考英语命题话题类作文范文篇2
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.
The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.
全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如汽车污染的空气影响了人们的呼吸，工厂释放污染的气体，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排人河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可见随意丢弃的垃圾。事实上，污染正威胁我们的生存。
地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代去照顾好它。庆幸的是，愈来愈多的人们已经意识到这些问题。政府已经采取了很多措施去解决这些问题，法律已被通过以制止污染。我希望这些问题在不远的将来能得到解决，我们的家园变得越来越好。
高考英语命题话题类作文范文篇3
Nowadays study abroad is very popular. Even some primary school students, whose families are well off, are studying abroad, let alone university students and postgraduates. Studying abroad can widen ones view and help learn about the cultures of foreign countries. Of course, its a good way to learn foreign languages. But study abroad is not suitable for everyone because of the high cost, fees. If a students family cant support him , he has to struggle in a foreign country just for a living not for his studies. I think he neednt go abroad. He can study well in China.
So study abroad is one way but not the only way to ones education and success.
如今，出国留学已成为一种潮流，甚至一些家庭条件比较富裕的小学生也出国留学，更不用说大学生和一些研究生了。出国留学能开阔一个人的视野，帮助了解外国的文化。 当然，对学习外语更有好处。但是，由于高昂的花费和学费，并不是人人都适合出国留学。如果一个学生的家庭付不起这些钱的话，他必须在国外努力工作来换取学费，这样却耽误了学业，我认为他就不必要硬要出国了，他完全可以在国内学得很好的。
因此，对于一个人的教育与成功来说， 出国留学是一种出路，但并不是惟一的出路。
英语作文命题（4）
高考英语作文命题方法1、审文体
是记叙文体还是议论文体?抑或夹叙夹议类散文?或者其它?
2、审范围
时间限制、人物限制、事件限制、空间限制、主体限制;功能、构造、使用方法的限制，等等
3、审内容
从哪些方面写什么内容
4、审关系
根据概念之间或偏正、或并列、或因果、或递进、或包容等关系，以便确立文章的重点和内容的逻辑关系。
今年高考英语作文1：The Eldership’s WordsMost people get tired of hearing their parents’ words, because their parents have told them the many times before, in the long term, people want to turn their deaf ears to their parents. Especially for the teenagers, they are rebellious and go against what their parents say. I am one of them, when I begin to hear my mother’s babbling, I act as listening to her, the fact is that I don’t put what she say in mind. One day, when I was shopping, I lost my wallet, I was so worried, I started to thinking about my parents’ words, they had told me all the time to be careful, but I just forgot about it. I learned the lesson that we should listen to the eldership’s words, they have experienced so much, what they told us is precious experience for us to learn.
大部分人厌倦了听父母的话，因为他们的父母之前和他们说了很多次，长期下来，人们会对父母的话充耳不闻。特别是青少年，他们叛逆，和父母说的对着干。我就是其中一个，当我开始听到父母的喋喋不休，我装作听她的话，事实是我并没有把她说的放在心上。有一天，我在购物的时候把手机弄丢了，我很担忧，开始想起父母的话，他们一直告诉我要小心，但是我就是听完就丢掉。我学到了教训，我们应该听长辈的话，他们经历了那么多，告诉我们的都是值得我们学习的宝贵经验。
今年高考英语作文2：Bright AfternoonThe cold air has come for a while, I stayed at my house all the time, as there was nothing for me go do, I watched the movies. When I saw the beach and sunshine in the movie, I miss the sunshine so much. Today is lucky for me, the sun finally comes out, I decide to go out for a walk and take in the fresh air. The breeze blows me softly, I can sense the coming of spring, I walk into a coffee shop and choose a table which is near the window. I sit down and watch people just walk by, I see all kinds of face expressions, I try to read them. There is a girl who is talking to his boyfriend, maybe he is proposing her, I can see from the girl’s sweet smile. There is another man sitting alone, may he is waiting for his wife. I have a great time in the bright afternoon.
冷空气来了有一阵子了，我整天呆在屋子里，由于没有事情做，我看了很多电影。当我在电影中看到海滩和阳光，我很想念阳光。今天我很幸运，太阳终于出来了，我决定外出走在，呼吸新鲜的空气。威风轻轻吹过我，我可以感觉得到春天的到来，我走进一家咖啡店，选了一张靠窗的桌子。我坐了下来，看着人们经过，我看到了各种各样的表情，我尝试着去解读。有一个女孩正在和他的男朋友聊天，也许他正在向她求婚，我从女孩甜蜜的微笑中就可以看出来。另外一个男人独自坐着，也许他正在等待他的妻子。我在明媚的午后度过了愉快的时光。
今年高考英语作文3：Do Not Lose the CourageI am not a brave girl, I am afraid of losing face in front of my friends and parents, so I always let the chance go and refuse to try. Once, I have a chance to take a performance in the Christmas show, but thinking about if I performed badly, all my friends would laugh at me, so I gave up the chance. But now, I am tired of letting so many chances to go, I want to try, after seeing my friends take all the chances to try, I am not going to be the outsider all the time, I want to live my own life and make some differences. People say failure is not terrible, the unforgettable thing are to lose the courage to try and then making all kinds of excuses. Let’s take out our courage and do what we want to do.
我不是一个勇敢的女孩，我害怕在朋友很父母面前丢脸，因此我总是让几乎溜走，拒绝去尝试。曾经，我有机会在圣诞节目上表演，但是一想到如果我表演不好，所有的朋友都会取笑我，所以我放弃了机会。但是现在，我厌倦了让那么多的机会溜走，我想要尝试，在看了那么多的朋友抓住所有的机会尝试以后，我不准备再当个局外人，我想要活出自己的生活，有所作为。人们说失败并不可怕，失去勇气尝试, 不断找各种借口才是不可原谅的。让我们拿出勇气，做自己想做的吧。
英语作文命题（5）
As to myself, I prefer the latter view. A well-paid job exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people, with no exception to me. Although it might be impossible to measure the value of one's job in terms of money, salary counts most when I choose my future career. And according to my experience, our career choices largely depend on how and where we have been brought up. I come from a poor urban family and my parents were both laid-off workers. In order to finance my tuition, they had been working hard over the past four years. As the only son in my family, I have to shoulder the burden of supporting my family.
In short, salary is the first consideration in my choice of career. (182 words)
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